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Briana Almengor's avatar

Oddly, I had some time this morning to write. I should be cleaning up the feathers my dogs strewn all over our living room in their destructive play with one of our pillows, but you gave me a reason to put off that chore for just a couple more minutes.

Here is my response to your prompt

A son’s request

Please see me,

My specific needs

My humanity

Through a lens of curiosity

Instead of your own insecurities

That I don’t perform or conform

According to the norms

Of society

Please see through my behaviors

To my why.

I try to tell you

I’m not the same

I’m in pain

And even disdain my own

Essence

Unable to escape

I mask to stand fast

Amidst the waves

That crash and crush

My identity

Please see me and

Thousands like me

Who don’t fit categories

Of normal, typical,

Customary

I am a custom,

One of a kind

You’ll have to fly blind

Parenting me

I come with no manual

No formula will fix me

I don’t need to be fixed

Just loved and seen

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Charis Crandall's avatar

Two actual requests came to mind from this prompt, one from each of my sons. I apologize in advance if these are too raw, but they are rooted in my story, whether I want them to be or not.

One Son's Request

Please forgive me, I

am sorry I could not love

you enough to live.

We did.

The Other Son's Request

Please, please promise me

you won't let this deep, deep grief

destroy your marriage.

We do.

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